There Goes The Neighborhood
I take a
deep breath. The wrought iron gate creaks on its hinges, and I step onto the
stone path. My heart beats faster as I walk up the blue painted steps to the
front porch, and it’s practically in my mouth when I ring the front doorbell—on
the bottom, because that’s the only way it works.
The door
opens, and I’m greeted by blonde hair, blue eyes, and shimmering smile.
“Hi,” she
says politely, “Can I help you?”
“H-hi,” I
stammer. My heart races and my brain struggles, trying desperately to remember
the speech I’d practiced a thousand times. “Hi. Um…I used to live
here—like…until last week when, um, you bought it, and I… I was wondering…if
you wouldn’t mind if I could just come in. Just to say goodbye?”
Her face
softens, and she nods. “Yeah. Sure. I’m sure mom won’t mind.”
I let the
dark-haired girl in through the front door, feeling a bit guilty. She looks
sad.
“They don’t
like us,” I can hear my mom saying, “They think we’re taking their neighborhood. Gentrifying it. “
She always
says it with a toss of her head, a dismissive scoff. I always feel dismissive
too. It’s not my fault they can’t afford it, so why should they blame me? But
now I feel bad for feeling that way. Because if I was in their position, I
would hate me too.
I watch her
walk up the carpeted stairs, and I tiptoe behind her. As she runs her finger
along my bedpost, I realize that this isn’t really my room. It’s been hers for
so long, and I feel like it still should be.
I feel like a thief.
I run my
finger along the bedpost. The walls around me are a bright shade of pink, and
it scares me. They used to be blue, a dark, soft, comfortable blue. But that
was when they were mine.
Everything
in this house is different now. The walls, the rugs, the furniture. I look
around me and I feel scared, because I feel like my childhood memories will
vanish, along with this house. This house that isn’t mine anymore.
I step out
the front door again, and take one long, last, sad look. I walk down the steps,
down the path, and to the gate. As I close the gate behind me, I turn, forcing
myself to face away.
“Goodbye,”
I whisper.
There goes
the neighborhood.
This is really cool because it's not like the other posts I read. You wrote your own story instead of talking about something else. This story is really sad but true at the same time. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think you presented your thoughts in a really creative way where we get to see the points of view from both sides of the argument. It was interesting how you set up the situation that the "Arrivals . . . there goes the neighborhood" could apply to in present day. It was a wonderful piece of writing and I hope you continue with the creativity.
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